A momentous moment in the history of Malaysia

 A momentous moment in the history of Malaysia is Malaysia finally stand and rise. In which means the day at 10th May 2018.

 At that day, Dr Mahathir Mohammad brought a group which stands against the Minister group recently. Before those days, some people really stand with their bravery and stand against the pollute society.

 I never thought that day will come. Last 5 years, Malaysia almost fall because of 'him'. I thought this year will be his win but I never thought that a new group will stand against them, it was the greatest moments. I finally saw some justice at this world.

 It was the momentous history in Malaysia. He make a comeback against 'him'. No one ever expect that but this is true. Maybe in near future, this will be carved in our history book as Malaysia did fought before.

Comments

  1. Kaito EmpressAugust 6, 2018 at 6:20 AM

    Hello. I like how you keep it short and simple about this topic but there are some parts which I don't understand. You didn't elaborate that much so it confuses me a bit. I get the rough idea that you are trying to say but you need to talk a bit more on how it happen, why it happen and so on. I like it and your hooks are quite average which could be improved more. You can do it!

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  2. Lim Wei MinAugust 7, 2018 at 5:13 AM

    - There are some grammar errors that you have made, for an example:
    -Proposition usage:
    -"I finally saw some justice at this world." The word 'in' should replace the 'at'
    -Tenses:
    -"He make a comeback...."
    -"No one ever expect that...."
    (These should be in past tense.)
    I am pretty sure I have missed some because I am not that good at Grammar.
    The content is quite straight-forward for people that know the insight but it might confuse readers that don't know anything about politics in Malaysia. You can elaborate on some points and explain the event that happened in more details instead of giving a bold statement. It is not a bad blog as I can understand most parts of it but some sentences and words that are used took me quite some time to understand.

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